I have attempted to right books in the past but they never tern out. For this attempt I tried something different, I tried planning out the story then setting a dead line for when I HAD to get my book finished. So far it has gone well but I would like your opining about my first chapter. So PLEASE leave a comment!!!
Jaycea’s Answers
This book is about haw Jaycea answers questions she faces in childhood and mite face in adulthood. As you read this book think about what she faced in life.
Jacynne . M .Collver
Chapter 1: What to say
It was Passover, the Jewish celebration of when the angle of death passed over them in Egypt. Jaycea, with her friends and family, were celebrating with the Jewish church in Homer Alaska in the year 2007.
“I remember it well” says Jaycea “Tara and I had brat our dolls, Kenzy and Cassidy, to the celebration. We had just finished eating when the speaker came over to us and asked us haw old our ‘children’ were ‘two’ we said and he asked us… ‘Where and what are the fathers like’? I said Cassidy’s father was out camping with the other children. Tara said her husband was at work. We said that they were kind and gentle and loved to be with there family!
“Then he asked if we had had a doctor or a midwife. Tara said doctor and I said midwife.
“But then he asked ‘did you give your baby’s shots when they were born’? We hesitated but then I said ‘No’ he asked why and I said ‘cause I did not want to hurt her’! Then he said ‘But don’t you want her to be healthy’? We both sat silent for a moment and he said ‘never mined nice talking to you.’ We said good bye and sat silent for a couple minuets.
“Now I wish he would have asked again for I would have said ‘I don’t think neither she nor any one ells needs them to be healthy because God is taking care of us!’
“What a grate feeling to have an adult asks us that I know we’ll never forget it!!!”
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