I think it should sound something like this...
White, crisp and sparkling.
Straight but small, dotted with brown.
I imagine them belonging to a young eagle soaring above my head.
Crystallized and stiff.
Long and ovaled.
I imagine a owl, silently flying in the night.
As the weather warms up I imagine the young eagle's feathers change from frosty white to brown.
Later I imagine the owl flies away,
and is replaced by colorful song birds with green all over.
Around August I imagine that most of the song birds fly south,
but others stay longer,
now there is red, orange and a little brown.
The first snow comes,
and I imagine the owls come back,
crystallized and stiff,
long, oval shaped and silent,
they fly in the dark.
I imagine more eagle feathers,
white and sparkling,
a little brown,
still straight but this time tall.
As the sesons change I still imagine but I'll never forget my first winter of feathers.
So what do you think so far? I have to have 32 lines. So it's a work in progress.
Alaska Time


4 comments:
one word, that's all I have: beautiful
I loved it! So creative and lovely.
This is very petty.
I was never that good at writing poems.
Anna
It's beautifully written. I loved it. You have a wonderful imagination.
Keep writing!
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